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Clatter track-tide wail Bearing who knows what or where Vague longing… - the period of cosmography
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anselmo_b
Clatter track-tide wail
Bearing who knows what or where
Vague longing in its wake.
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dyvyd From: dyvyd Date: July 3rd, 2009 12:59 am (UTC) (Link)
Well, I(as you might guess) like this sort of poem, and of course the poem itself.

The sprung logic makes it a it a much longer poser than just three lines would otherwise be: the "what or where." Or maybe it is a form of "sprung grammar," like GM Hopkins manipulated rhythm?

Pondering this can go different ways on different days.
anselmo_b From: anselmo_b Date: July 3rd, 2009 06:14 am (UTC) (Link)
It's hard times you know, we can't be prodigal with words.
Thanks and glad you like it.
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